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Anyway!

I like how this story is developing

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Click Here to see: My 5min Animation. A romantic story about two faeries bound by ambition called, "The Sun and the Moon"

Motto to live and die by: Live proud, Die Satisfied.

This page tells an excellent story, too. I like how it gives a little emphasis to the boy waking up, then a lot of emphasis on realizing that he's not alone. I look forward to seeing how they'll get along.

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My Manga-[link]
Yes, there is no Fate for us
Only those who are swallowed by
Ignorance and fear and miss a step
Fall into the rapid river called Fate
-Bleach, Volume 6

Oh, one more thing. I noticed that you seem to have trouble drawing hands. I've always had a LOT of trouble drawing those, myself, but here's a trick to it that you might want to try sometime- you can actually draw a pretty detailed and workable hand with some simple shapes, in this order:

1. Start with a square for the palm of the hand.
2. Draw a small triangle coming off the bottom of one of the sides of that square, for where the thumb will go. Excuse my dead terrible ascii art, but it's a little something like this so far:
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3. You've got your hand ready for a thumb and fingers. Each finger has 3 parts and 2 joints, and the thumb has 2 and 1, so let's just draw those parts as some connected cylinders. If you want to change the pose of the fingers, you can just show them bending by tilting those cylinders. (The thumb should make it just past the end of your starting box, and the longest, middle finger should be about the same length as that starting box. )
4. Round out the lines, smooth it out as needed, and erase the guidelines. Every time you get stuck drawing a hand, you can always fall back on this structure.

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My Manga-[link]
Yes, there is no Fate for us
Only those who are swallowed by
Ignorance and fear and miss a step
Fall into the rapid river called Fate
-Bleach, Volume 6

Yeah, i got a lot of problemas with hands and thanks for the tips. It sounds useful!

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Even a single pencil can create a life in arts...