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Chapter 1: Page 17
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~selenaloong:iconselenaloong: Dec 20, 2007, 6:58:11 PM
hi theonepencil,i have see your comics until and later i post this comment i will coutine see this comics...that is i want to say your comics seem lost about the say about "ah!looks like we have arrive headmaster office"and now i also see that the b0y didnt ask about the headmaster what and the headmaster say about her????but the story not bad....and plz make the comics clearly...
~TheOnePencil:iconTheOnePencil: Dec 20, 2007, 8:31:57 PM
Ok, I'll try to explain a little bit more.

Firstly, it's the funny part about the headmaster's office. I purposely made this to let the reader expected that it is a school...however, it's actually the principal's house which is really out of the expectation. See Chapter 1 page 15 for a while...there's a map which tells that the school was more like a city.

Secondly, in Michael's mind in Chapter 1, he was trying to find a way to go home which is the real world...however, the principal was trying to get the boy to enrol in this school instead of letting him go home because he had never heard of a spell that makes people to go from a world to another world.

I'm sorry if you couldn't understand...maybe you're right...I should think more story than that! ^^;

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~selenaloong:iconselenaloong: Dec 21, 2007, 5:29:02 AM Mood: Love
oh is ok and i just read finsih chapter 1 and is nice!i love it!where is chapter 2?